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Form-al Failure  [13+]
Form 1040 or bust (4/15 - 4/16 Writer's Cramp entry)
by Writer_Mike
Review of Form-al Failure  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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With great skill you've told a tale
Of an attempt that did fail.
Your title and brief description work
Your cover picture is a perk.

The rhyme scheme takes the story forward
(Or backward? I mean it's toward
The ripping of a precious sheet
'Coz the machine couldn't take the heat.)

Though a paper clip you were un-friending,
The story has a happy ending
And overall, it's a nice little read
Giving the smile that every reader does need.


Write On!
- Sonali

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