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 The Storyteller  [E]
Some of the magic of storytelling in a free form poem.
by Nanapockets
Review of The Storyteller  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hallo!
I enjoyed this poem about the worlds a storyteller can create. You have some great imagery there!

Suggestion:
While I enjoyed the poem, I found most of the topics you talk of to be in the 'fantasy' genre. (Maybe only the clowns and pirates aren't from this genre.)
In that sense, to be honest, I found it a teeny bit cliched. I'd have liked to see something a little more unique - something that doesn't usually get mentioned in a story.

I do like the poem and I'm rating it accordingly, it just would have been the icing on the cake if I'd had an 'aha' moment with something unusual!

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- Sonali

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