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Tomorrow  [E]
Finding strength to continue ... (Form: Fox Septet)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Kit
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+]. *Smile*

Overall Impression:

Ah, this touched me deeply. How can so few lines express so much feeling? We only get a glimpse into this man's life and yet we feel we know him, and the battle that he's going through. We can only wish him well, and that life will be easier for him tomorrow.

I think that this is a relatable poem. There are times in many people's lives when we're faced with obstacle after obstacle and we're clinging on to the tiniest shred of hope to keep on going. Sometimes we're not even doing it for ourselves anymore, as we've given up on our own dream, but we do have dreams for our loved ones and so we have to believe that it will get better. If we keep on working hard, we can build something better, because each and every day there is tomorrow.

On the technical side of things I like this form, and you use it to great effect. Once more, excellent work.

Suggestions:

This is a beautiful poem. I wouldn't change a single thing about it. Very well done!

My Rating:

Well, I haven't made a secret about what I think of your work here. It's beautiful.

I had no suggestions. This is a well-deserved 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

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