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Review of On Being Yellow  
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "On Being Yellow"  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

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*Reading* THE POEM

A fun poem about being promoted to yellow case here on WDC.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

What a heartwarming, fun, and uplifting poem! It's a nice dedication to a yellow case promotion. There's a nice beat to the poem when read outloud.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. T

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest using a "deeper" shade of yellow, maybe gold or even an organish-yellow, because the bright yellow used here makes it really hard to see the words. The poem is easy to read and understand.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Yellow is the star of the day sunshine for all to see" - It's just an uplifting description which passes out good vibes. My example isn't necessarily yellow but it's easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title is reflective of the poem and the opening engages the reader. The poem is not overly long and hold the reader's attention well. I enjoyed the lighthearted tone and the positivity. The poem is upbeat and puts a smile on one's face. This poem is a great way to spread the yellow case on WDC.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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