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 | In Pleasure's Service  [18+] I wait patiently for the master to awake and hear my song. UENG Flash Fiction  |
| (5.0)| A "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  ReviewStoryline: A little insight into taboo subject matter according to the masses. It was nice to read something out of my usual comfort zone, and this quick read was really good. I was pulled in from the first line and you held my attention until the last line and gave me things to think about afterward. It's always a good thing in my opinion. Spelling/Grammar Issues: none Description/emotion: You made it easy to get into the head of the woman who waited. Her thoughts were clear and focused. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants, and the thought of these things happening has her ready for the next experience. Her song is a melody of her journey in domination and submission, though her definition of the word differs from the dictionary. To her, it's a freedom of expression, of giving all she has to give to another. Overall Impression: I liked that you clearly spelled out how trusting someone must be to go this route. It is a mindset, as well as a physical act. Between books and movies these days, that point tends to be overlooked. Using the form of her own song made this a standout piece. Now my mind is wondering what happens next, and will it be all she hopes for. The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  
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