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 Are You…  [E]
Courage is essential for the military service.
by Ashok Banerjee
Review of Are You…  
Review by Kit
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Ashok Banerjee ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+]. *Smile*

Overall Impression:

This is a very interesting poem about some of what you need to be suited to a military career. It correctly establishes that it takes a lot, and it's certainly not for everyone.

As this poem expresses, it takes courage to fight against evil powers. I do believe that there is more than one way to do so - I am reminded of the underground resistance in various countries during World War II, for example, with some people hiding those who were being persecuted, and helping them escape. But yes, it's definitely a must when joining the military. You know what you're putting on the line, and that may well include your own life.

I guess that's one reason why I oppose military conscription. Many of those who are called up won't have the necessary mindset for the career and that doesn't do anyone any good. As you can see, your poem offered me food for thought, and for that I thank you.

Suggestions:

I only have one small suggestion. You use punctuation in this poem, and for that I am thankful. It assists the overall clarity and reading experience. In line with this I suggest allowing the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. That would perfect the reading experience.

My Rating:

This is a poem that made me think, which is always a good thing!

I did have one suggestion, but it's more of a matter of personal preference. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

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