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The Locked Door  [13+]
Benjamin learns that some doors are better left unopened
by iKïyå§ama
Review of The Locked Door  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A "Game of Thrones"   by Gaby ~ Just tired Review


Storyline: This was a nail-biter, as I felt like I crawled up beside Benjamin and followed him through every step of this journey, desperate to know what was beyond that locked door. The ending did not disappoint, and was more a total shock that I'm still shaking my head over. I assumed someone was there, but the reality - wow.

Spelling/Grammar Issues: None

Description/emotion: Great job here. Benjamin shows how much love he holds for his father, and how spending time with him in the basement working on projects together is the best part of his day. He liked being praised for doing well, it makes him feel good. But the mystery behind that door, the expressions from his parents when he asks about the door, and their conflicting responses pique his curiosity. Determination leads him to sneak downstairs and unravel the mystery.

Overall Impression: What a gripping tale you've spun. I couldn't read fast enough to get to the end. Shocked is an understatement. Losing a child is a parent's worst nightmare. It's heartwrenching. These parents found a totally unconventional way to remedy their heartache. And not only once, but multiple times. Great detail and that twist ties it all together and then the questions begin regarding Benjamin.




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