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CAN YOU SAY CONSPIRACY THEORY?  [13+]
RFID disaster BEWARE! It is A SPOOF-- NOT TO BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY,Or is it?
by ԜԜ On The Road Again!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello ԜԜ On The Road Again!

First impression:

Oh. A conspiracy theory. I only believe in one, but I like hearing all of them.

What works:

The disclaimer at the bottom that dates this piece to before smartphones is indeed a little prophetic. I remember when the quarantines started in 2020 and some governments were "offering" tracking apps for our phones that would tell us whether we were in contact with a person who later tested positive for a virus, I didn't download it. Google tracks wherever I go already. iPhones notoriously also track where everyone goes.

What needs work:

Until the next time {e,dash} *Right* is that a broken emoji where it says e,dash? It might be an idea to fix it or delete it.

Final thoughts:

The writing here was good. I always thought that the right to bare arm and bear arms and arms of bears who bare their bear arms needed to be punned over some more and your observation here delivered. This was originally listed as Comedy, Sci-Fi, and Other. I wonder if it still qualifies as Sci-Fi if it's reality now? Definitely give us something else than "other." Do we have a "Technology" genre?

Annette
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