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Gamelandia Letter  [E]
A class assignment: make a diorama and then make a letter about it.
by Itchybarn
Review of Gamelandia Letter  
Review by Maryann
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Itchy Barn! I'm back again! I found this story intriguing because I'm a bit embarrassed to say, I had absolutely no idea what a 'diorama' was. I must be getting old

I thought I'd learn something new today, what a diorama is, and have fun reading your story at the same time.

Gosh, is this the same teacher who assigned that last after the summer assignment? What a clever person they are! *Bigsmile*

So, I had to look it up on the internet. I found that 'a diorama is a replica of a scene, typically a three-dimensional model either full-sized or miniature. Sometimes it is enclosed in a glass showcase for a museum. Dioramas are often built by hobbyists as part of related hobbies such as military vehicle modeling, miniature figure modeling, or aircraft modeling' In the case of your story, it's an internet thing.

I laughed out loud when I started reading your story! You are good at comedy! That's a talent that can't really be taught! The beginning opening paragraph talked about how the village had turned into a pre-war zone because it was in the middle of an update.

How much fun is that! I could imagine from your descriptions Pac-Man and Mrs. Pac-Man destroying houses, and Donkey Kong and others throwing things like barrels around all over the place. I used to play Farmville years ago when it was popular on Facebook. (Ah the memories!) I could picture planting my strawberries, and watching the chaos and havoc of aliens attacking the crops! LOL Such fun ideas!
Maybe that should be a real game! ...Farming through chaos! I downloaded your Happy Travels years ago. Did you ever think of making another game? *Wink*

I like the bullet notes that Xbox and Nintendo 'wrote'. And, it included bringing a backup card in case the city gets lost and needs to reboot! Thanks for sharing the humorous story.


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