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Review #4747988
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 Freedom  [E]
Where will the animal escapees venture?
by SandraLynn Team Florent!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
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Whee! I’m here with a panicky review to finish the dratted doors with *Rolling* There seems to be some confusion about how many reviews are supposed to be crammed in that last door: I’m absolutely certain Gaby is demanding twenty (*Shock2*) but Annette tells me it’s just ten. At any rate, better safe than sorry, because I had no idea the Doors would be closing tomorrow at midnight. I’m so close!

I love your spin on this prompt. The beavers escaping from the fur farm is heartwarming and exciting, and perfectly suits you as you’re from Canada. We see the aged leader bringing them through adventures and trials to a new more natural and happier life in the wild, and we hope that the ending is a happily ever after. There is a chance they might be found and recaptured.

My story was about a neglected horse… but whatever. I’m surprised you haven’t opened a folder or a book item to hold your GoT stories in. That may be a good idea to keep everything tidy later on. Also, it’s fun to include the specific prompt so people know what you had in mind.

Great story! Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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