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 Fantasy Dinner Party  [E]
Your hosting a dinner what one person would you invite and why
by knight life
Review by Annette
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello knight life

First impression:

This forum has been closed for nearly 22 years. I am so glad that you kept it around in your portfolio as I am here to give you my thoughts for a Game of Thrones challenge.

What works:

The way the contest or activity is described works. It's always kind of curious to ask who would be the one person someone wants to meet. Real or imagined, alive or from the past. I usually enjoy entering these kind of contests or writing for these prompts.

What needs work:

Your hosting a dinner what one person would you invite and why *Right* You're and the sentence could also use a question mark. Because, why not? The intro line is the first thing anyone sees, aside from the title.

Imagine your hosting a dinner party *Right* you're It seems second person possessive was your personal grammar nemesis 22 years ago.

For a novel anf fun approach *Right* Just a little typo and

Final thoughts:

It would be nice to see something like this in the now time. It is for sure a neat contest. Although I think that the prizes would have to be modernized. With the current flood of merit badges, that's pretty much become the minimal standard to get people to want to enter something.

Even with the observations about the typos, this is a five star worthy forum simply because it's history and there aren't any grades for history.

Annette
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