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 Fireworks of Freedom  [E]
Acrostic poem on the power provided by freedom. Here's to using it wisely!
by BeHereBook
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I love a good poem, and this is nifty, the free verse flowing loosely across the page with a conversational tone as we see one person musing upon the significance of freedom in this great country.

I love how the entire metaphor is built upon the idea of fireworks, sparkling to life and bringing up great truths about freedom. We see the “flammable expressions of rebellion, reformation, or resistance” and are reminded of how important it is to not only state our views, but to act upon them to bring justice and peace and advance the causes of civilization. Your creativity in making such a simple poem that at first glance looks like a run on sentence, but then we see that it’s an acrostic with metaphorical expression that is quite deep, is admirable.

My views on poetry are laidback and easygoing; I see the crafting of a poem as a highly subjective art form, where heart and soul matter more than rigid forms and rules. I detest counting syllables and measuring meter, and since this is a free verse poem, none of that needs to be touched on - which is great because I would have no clue as to advising anyone on those things.

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