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Bee~dazzling Entanglements  [E]
A perplexing entanglement of mystifying fragments to amuse and bedazzle.
by ~LadyBee~
Review by Annette
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ~LadyBee~

First impression:

The title and intro line are certainly bedazzling. I don't know what to expect, but I am certainly intrigued as to what was going on back then in 2003 and 2004.

What works:

It's super cool that the banner (image) is still intact. Most older forums or pieces that used to have images have a broken link there now.

The rules still make sense to me. I think I would have liked to play this game at that time. But I only joined the site in 2008 and it took me almost a half year to even figure out the most basic ways to use the site.

What needs work:

The image and owners name in the "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor *Right* there is now a defunct link in the middle of the text. It's not really a big deal, but if you remember the title of that item and can type it in, that might be an idea if you were ever to update this page. But you probably shouldn't because it's such a historic account.

Final thoughts:

Very fun idea to create a visual puzzle like this.

This is a five star worthy forum for many reasons, but also because it is a part of Writing.Com history that you are preserving here.

Annette
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