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 How should I make the trinket series?  [E]
How should I make it?
by Itchybarn
Review by Annette
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Itchybarn

First impression:

A simple question in as the title, repeated in the intro line a little shorter. It's clear right away that this poll will be about trinkets.

What works:

The three choices for the poll are straightforward.

What needs work:

The written area of the poll page could repeat that this is about a trinket series. And it could give a little context to your existing trinkets and why you like to make them.

I also think this could have used more poll options.

It would be nice to have the option to choose "infinite number with prizes for the first three or five people who collect"

How would you know that? If they go to collect and leave a comment on the collection area that they did so, you can take those first three or five's word as them being the first to collect. Or at least the first to collect and be able to follow directions.

Final thoughts:

I definitely love trinkets a little too much. I think I am in the top three or top five trinket creators here on the site. So I am definitely in the camp of: more trinkets are more better. Because who doesn't like these colorful things and the (usually) fun messages on the inside.

Annette
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