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 | Dulcet Drops  [ASR] HEAT... in all its meanings. A Bite Size Poetry Entry  |
| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Dulcet Drops" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMThe poem captures a sensual in the heat of a kiss.  WHAT I LIKEDNice word play here to imply something much more heated - not only the physicality of the moment, but the intensity of the persons feelings and emotions. Not only is word play succinct, the author uses a good economy of words to paint the picture of Dulcet Drops.  STRUCTUREThis is a two stanza poem with four lines each. The 2nd and 4th lines rythme in the quatrains. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion would be to increase the font on WDC to make it easier on the eyes. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "I lower my lips to your liquescent skin." - liquescent is a word that's not very common, but the author gives you the definition in the notes which, once understood makes it the perfect word for this place in the poem. It's a great visual that I can picture in my imagination. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSI liked the notes section at the end of the poem. It helps the reader to understand the word choices. The notes give the meaning of Dulcet, and once understand, makes the title the perfect fit for the poem. The opening engages the reader. Well done! Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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