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Erotic Romance Writing & Reviewing Group  [E]
Review group for erotic genre.
by Purple Celebrates
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Review by Annette
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Purple Celebrates

First impression:

There is a little bit of confusion between the name of the group and the intro line. The name mentions "writing" and the intro line mentions "reviewing." Of course, these two go hand in hand, but they are usually explained further into the item.

The thumbnail that shows the group's banner makes the page very inviting as it shows a level of professionalism.

What works:

The page is short and neat. The banner with the group name below reiterates what the title said and cements it.

What needs work:

I am still not sure whether the group is for people who want to write erotic romance or for people who want to read and review the erotic romance stories written by others. Both questions come up, but they are not explained in how they relate to each other.

There is a link to a group with the exact same name, but it is set to private. Is that a forum page? Because it's also called group, which feels like the thing rotates in on itself, but clearly these are two different items.

Final thoughts:

I wish I was still in erotic romance writing. I used to have a lot of fun with it. The past years have been so busy and the site has grown less anonymous. It's good, but it also made the writing feel less free.

Annette
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