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Review #4748138
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The Hidden Library of House Mormont  [ASR]
A book to hold all writings from Game of Thrones.
by Krista of House Mormont
         Review for entry/chapter: "Short Story- Mormont House Announcement
Review by Choconut
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Krista of House Mormont ,

*Dragon* This review was written on behalf of House Targaryen as part of "Game of Thrones! *Dragon*


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The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.


What I liked ... Can I say everything? Well, it is true, so I will.

*Bulletr* I wanted to review something from everyone taking part in this month's "Game of Thrones, so I had a peek at your portfolio this morning, and I found this little gem. I love the title and byline. It piqued my interest. As I read, I couldn't help but imagine how incredible this would be, if it were true. I think it would raise millions at auction. It would also raise a bunch of money for the famed auction house, Mormont House. (I love that name, by the way.)

*BulletR* This article reads as though it really is a newspaper article. It sounds very professional, and the grammar is flawless. It is a pleasure to read. At the same time, it is incredibly entertaining. There is a subtle humour running through it, and that made me smile.

*BulletR* I loved this sentence: "It sheds new light on the creative genius of the world's greatest playwright, providing us with a fresh glimpse into his artistic process and his profound understanding of the human condition." Again, I have to say, can you imagine how crazy the world (and, in particular, England) would go if this were true? I do wonder whether there is anything more to learn about Shakespeare's artistic process, though. He has been studied to death, hasn't he? It is incredible how much we know about him through his work.

*Bulletr* My favourite part of the story is here: "The manuscript was discovered tucked away within the hidden chamber of an ancient grandfather clock." That is fabulous. How much would I have loved to be the owner of that clock? Or, to be honest, any grandfather clock. They have a certain nobility, I always think. But hidden chambers are always a draw for anyone's imagination, so this really appealed to me.


Suggestions: Krista, I have nothing, I'm afraid. I think this is perfect as it is.


Parting comments: This put a huge smile on my face first thing in the morning. Just what I needed to begin the day. Thank you.


Choconut

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