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It's a nice little adventure short story.
Once taller and with her friends went to Rifle Falls State Park on a chilly day in September. They went there and selected a spot on the edge of the campgrounds. Everything started greatly. But the narrator due to addiction, felt in danger.
That night came. There was no way of survival. She used her intelligence and stayed safe.
Her description was funny. It played a key role. But there was an important message. The habit of drinking especially when you are outside may invite severe dangers.
It's a bright beginning.
Keep writing.
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