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Bikeriders Guest Book  [E]
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Review by Annette
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Bikerider

First impression:

This Guest Book is placed in an easy to find spot in your portfolio, so it invites a visitor to stop in right away.

The paragraphs about you as writer and you as a person in real life help greatly to get to know you beyond your fiction. It is nice to know the man, the myth, the legend in his natural habitat.

What works:

Your bike riding banner is a very cool effect. It not only matches your username and handle, but it gives the whole page an actiony feel.

What needs work:

You mention that an anthology published two of your stories, but there is no link as to where this anthology could be purchased.

Right below the publication announcement, there is a broken image link that could be cleaned up.

Your last reply to a visitor was ten months ago and you have two new messages since then. It might be an idea to reply to them.

Final thoughts:

Each time I go to a portfolio and see a Guest Book, I think I should make one too. These items don't fill up quickly, but they serve as a historical account of our time on this site and the many people who have virtually hung out with us. I've seen a lot of these this past month, so I'm starting to find out what I want from a Guest Book of my own.


Annette
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