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15 for 15 Contest --- Closed  [18+]
Do you have 15 minutes? Come in and join this contest!
by Legerdemain
Review by StephBee
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES "LOST TREASURE" CURRENTLY INACTIVE FORUM REVIEW

This is a review for "15 for 15 Contest --- Closed from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones

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THE LOST TREASURE/CURRENTLY INACTIVE FORUM

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15 for 15 Contest --- Closed  (18+)
Do you have 15 minutes? Come in and join this contest!
#994771 by Legerdemain
Is a forum that dared writers to take a look at a picture then spend 15 minutes a day for 15 days writing something based on the picture.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the idea of using a short amount of time to create a story. Writing shorts is an art, from 500 words to 2k words. A prompt like this would develop the following skills in writers: how to use a good economy of words in a short period of time to communicate a story.

*Star* RULES

The rules were listed in a dropnote link, which I thought was a good idea as it didn't clutter up the Introduction. However, when I clicked on the dropnote, I discovered there was a lot of rules, which led to the complexity of the contest. For me, when something appears too complex, I tend to shy away from it.

*Star* JUDGES

The guest judges were clearly listed., i.e., "theckenast" and drboris

*Star* AWARDS

I saw there were awards and grand prize winners listed in the body of the forum, but nothing in the Introduction. I would also posthumously suggest to create a separate BITEM that archived previous awards winners and have it linked in the Introduction. I like having a feature as this because it displays the history of the contest.

*Star* DONATIONS

There is a place to list donations and donors.

*Star* ENGAGING

The lost treasure had many contestants which are listed in the introduction and looked very active.

*Star*VARIETY

Variety would come in the way of the pictures offered on a daily basis.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to vary the colors and font to make it easier on the eyes. I did like the graphic in the Introduction as it helped to set a mood/tone for the forum/contest.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

This Lost Treasure was last active 12 years ago! I think the premise of the Forum /Contest is one that is a tad complex and if carried over/re-opened, I might suggest trying to simplify it a little.

*Star*POTENTIAL

This is a lost treasure that if I found it on a deserted island, I'd put it in my back pocket and would tinker with it at the evening campfire before I went to bed.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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