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Haunting Memories  [E]
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by Dave
Review of Haunting Memories  
Review by Beacon's Light
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi there, I'm Beacon and I'm from "The WDC Angel Army"  and am going to review your item. I hope the comments or suggestions will help you.

My impression of your poem: I completely understand how you feel because when I read the poem, it brought me back to when I lost my mom in March 25th, 2023. About 4 months before she passed, I got to see her and I hugged her tight before I left.

What I like: When you said, you're mom taught you lessons of life and you're mom wanted the best for you and your siblings.

Suggestion: just keep on writing and don't ever give up.

Final Thoughts: This poem is emotional and I enjoyed reading the poem. You really spoke from the heart and I like that. Since I've read some of your poems, you are a great poet and I hope you continue to keep writing. I like poems like this because it makes me think about what I went through with my mom and dad.

Thank you for sharing,
Beacon

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