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 Caveat Emptor  [E]
Let the buyer beware! A Limerick for the WDC's Limericks, Limericks, Limericks contest.
by JACE
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and Happy Account Anniversary!

Whee! I love a good clean playful limerick, and this fits the bill excellently. Your fast-paced flinging out of advertising slogans had me confused for a couple lines until I realized you were stringing together all the different ones.

And you even very considerately list the sources of such at the end. I remember Mom looking up the vintage "ring around the collar" commercials to regale me with... I think I have personal experience with at least 85% of the rest of those products and slogans. (Grey Poupon was actually one of Mom's favorite mustards in my childhood...)

I don't know if I should complain about Comic font here... For what it's worth, Apple has snubbed Comic Sans, replacing it on their mobile devices (which includes iPads) with some absurdly elegant and spidery script called Snell Roundhand. Perhaps I should bring up this compatibility issue with the StoryMaster, because I looked into it and I think there's a way for him to program the site to display the Apple equivalent of Comic Sans, which they call Chalkboard. As a Purple Case, what would you suggest?

Ok, that wasn't much of a review *Laugh* Great poetry here, with a slightly jumpy rhythm, but it conveys the comedic confusion of sales talk well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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