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Apple Bloom's Dirty Gas Station Feet  [18+]
After dangling her feet out her family's truck, a girl finds a boy checking out her soles.
by VanillaSoftArt
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It's an erotic story but a well-built short story. The central character is none other than Apple Bloom and another important character is a shy guy Wave. How do they spend time in the gas station? That is the subject of the story.
At the Gas Station, Apple Bloom made her feet dirty to attract the guys. Wave responded very quickly. Her purpose served. Wave cleaned up her feet. She left that small Gas Station.
A well-paced story. The reader will be happy to read it. That's all. A short time entertainment. Not much left think later.

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