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 Review #4749620 |
 | The Value of Kindness  [E] It can pay to be kind  |
| (5.0)| Greetings and welcome to writing.com! It’s amazing how a few simple words can evoke a universal nod of agreement. Nineteen words on three lines, something that feels as if it’s been said a hundred million times over the years, and yet it’s always going to be true and we should remind ourselves of it as much as possible. Your use of the basic concept of money to convey the fact of the value of kindness reminds us of the Golden Rule: do unto others as you would have them do unto you. I might suggest listing the contest it was written for in a dropnote ▼ at the bottom, and also a word count or line count is needed to enter most contests around here. And you should choose three more relevant genres for the item, even just as practice for more important items. I would recommend “Experience,” “Philosophy,” and “Community,” but there are other possibilities. Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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