Hi THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I liked your example of Bianca 's new poem style/format.

The poignant lines of the poem reveal a deep, intricate emotion, weaving a narrative of loss, memory, and a yearning for connection. The reference to a Sufi concert introduces a spiritual, almost mystical dimension to the reminiscence, suggesting that the experiences and cultural richness once shared continue to echo even in absence.

The term "Daddy darling" is an intimate, affectionate call to a beloved father figure, hinting at the depth of the bond and the void left behind.

The speculative, hopeful question about the father's presence at the concert from Heaven adds a layer of solace and ongoing dialogue beyond the physical realm.

Lastly, the "lost key" metaphor in the poem has a duality that could symbolize the unanswered questions, the unresolved emotions, or perhaps the key to understanding life's mysteries that the speaker wishes to share with their departed father. The smile upon hearing it signifies a moment of connection, a touching reminder that love and shared joy transcend the boundaries of time and space.

Well done with this one sister…



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