Hey T,

Your poem "Daddy" vividly portrays a father, juxtaposing his physical robustness and the gentleness of his spirit.

Its imagery, particularly the sweat trickling down a "masculine, strong-brow face" and activities performed "before the golden orb graced the sky," evocatively captures the essence of hard work and dedication. Meanwhile, the transition to "inky skies" under which "he took pen to paper" reveals an introspective and tender side, where "the softness of his soul flowed."

This duality challenges traditional perceptions of masculinity, suggesting that strength and sensitivity can coexist. The poem's rich, descriptive language and compelling imagery invite readers to appreciate the complexity of its subject's character, making it a compelling piece that resonates on multiple levels.

This is an excellent example of Bianca's new Poem structure/style. I want to be the first to say well done and good luck in the contest.

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