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Welcome to the Mystery Newsletter. Why are mysteries so popular? Because mysteries make you think. You follow every clue, examine the crime scenes and remember what each suspect said, until you solve the crime. A good mystery can keep you interested until the end. A great mystery will keep you guessing until the last page...when it makes you slap your forehead in surprise!
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Revising Your Short Story - 8 Tips for Polishing Your Prose
You've spent long hours writing your story. You have made sure each character has been fleshed out, the plot is to die for, and the ending is breathtaking. Now, you're ready to start submitting your piece, right?
Wrong.
Writing your story is only half the task. Once you get your story written, it's time to begin revising your work. Revising is an important part of writing. You want your work to be as perfect as humanly possible, so revising is essential. Spelling errors and grammar problems are only part of what you need to look for. Run-on sentences, plot lines that go nowhere and incorrect words also need to be addressed.
When you are ready to start revising your piece, keep these eight things in mind.
1. Read it aloud. Your ears will catch awkward wording your eyes missed. If you are stumbling over parts, or having to go back and re-read something, then it needs to be either reworded or expanded.
2. Listen to your characters' dialogue. Does it sound natural? Does it fit the characters? Be sure you don't have too much dialect in your dialogue. Ya'll is a nice way to show a character is from the South, but if every other word out of your character's mouth is ya'll, then it can get tedious to read. Remember a little goes a long way.
3. Tie up all the loose ends of your story's plot. If you have a minor plot line going be sure to end it. Don't leave your reader hanging at the end wondering what happened to Tony when he went off down that dark alley to help the main character look for clues.
4. Avoid using the same word over and over. Every writer does this, even the most famous. If you are careful, you can catch these minor repeats and replace the overused word with a more suitable one. Buy a good thesaurus and use it.
5. Beware of run-on sentences. A sentence with too many clauses and phrases can be confusing. Try breaking a run-on sentence into two, or shortening it.
6. Be careful of words that sound the same, but have different meanings. They're-there-their all sound the same, but don't mean the same. Same with it's-its. Remember your spell checker isn't going to catch these kinds of typos, you have to.
7. Use exclamation points only when one of the characters, or the writer, is actually exclaiming. It was a wild, exciting ride. Period. No exclamation point. But with, "What a wild, exciting ride!" the exclamation point is right. Be sure to use question marks correctly too.
8. Use your spell check or dictionary to make sure that words you're unsure of are spelled correctly. Spell checker will catch probably 95% of all misspells. The rest you'll have to catch by reading your piece.
Having another person read your work and circle any parts that don't make sense, or need to be revised, will also help you polish your prose. I know some writers, especially new ones, have trouble allowing others to read their work. But that is part of the writing process, allowing the outside world a look at your story.
Take your time with your revisions. Writing isn't a race to see who can cross the finish line first. It's an adventure to a distant land with new and exciting people to meet. So sit back and enjoy the ride. And don't forget to write!
Thank you for taking the time to read. Happy Writing!
darkin
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Thank you for the wonderful feedback from last week. And, Bill, your flowers are on their way
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darkin,
Remind me to never accept a bouquet of flowers from you...
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Chewie Kittie 
 I have Lily of the Valley in my front flowerbed!  What a great way to off the spouse!! Thanks!
I wouldn't recommend that, darkin
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Tehanu
The comic strip character, Poison Ivy, would be proud of your article, Darkin.  Nice job with the research.
The household items bit reminded me of what a friend told me once - that putting a little antifreeze in someone's shoes day after day will slowly poison the victim. I don't know if that's true, but I do know that at least one person murdered a relative by placing antifreeze, with its sweet taste, in a mixed drink. According to the below link, antifreeze is also an easy and seemingly innocent way to kill off pets and children -- there are often small antifreeze spills in driveways and streets that could account for the murders. http://www.slate.com/id/2103821/
Freaky, huh? Thanks for making me think...I feel your newsletter would definitely help writers put together a realistic death for their murder mysteries. 
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