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Action/Adventure: November 30, 2010 Issue [#4105]

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 This week: As Scene on TV
  Edited by: NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
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2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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Letter from the editor

If you open up your action scene with, um, action, keep the following in mind:

No confusion - No matter what action your protagonist exhibits, make sure readers can identify it right off the bat.

Peak their curiosity - why is the protagonist carrying a knife in one and an box of Oreo double stuffs in the other while running down the street screaming, "Warthogs and fish hooks." Readers have questions. Questions keep readers focused on your work, not their text messages or Nat Geo TV.

If you decide to open up your action scene with foreshadowing, consider these tips:

Keep your foreshadowing to a minimum. Provide only information critical for the set up. If you go overboard setting up the reader you run the risk of losing him or her to other activities, like flossing teeth or trimming fingernails.

Remember, your action scenes don't have to have fire, threat of death, or world ending concrescences. Your scenes do need to have an urgency requiring the protagonist to make quick decisions based on emotion or passion, or driven by character.


Editor's Picks

A MAN WHO HAS IT ALL   (13+)
An old mans story of escape, ice, and Speddo's.
#1633235 by youme

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#1718836 by Not Available.

The Outcast  (18+)
A child becomes an outcast, because the child is half human
#1399758 by Bruce Lee Gifford Jr.

The Blooper  (13+)
An embarrassing blooper occurs at a girls softball game.
#1550587 by George R. Lasher

STATIC
How I Killed My Boss  (18+)
Ever have one of those manipulative bosses? This story gets me.
#1181914 by I Don’t Like My Name

 
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