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It's totally different, I added more details . Brother kills obbsession on accident.
The Last Sunrise/ (rewrite)

  Misery sat in a ball with his eyes shut, his small three year old body shaking in fear. “Stand up Misery, be a brave little man in front of your mommy.” Collin sneered at his son.
  Misery forced himself to his feet and looked at his blonde haired father,”Please daddy, I no want to die.” The three year old pleaded softly, tears forming in his sorrowful grey eyes.
  “Collin.” Lilly called from the alley, the silver moon above her head illuminating her sad immortal beauty. ”Don’t.” Collin hissed, jealousy boiling in the pit of his stomach as he sprinted toward their little boy, with his blade unsheathed. Misery started to bawl as the blade slid through his mothers’ body and protruded from his back.
  “Lilly?” Collin whimpered, “Wh- what are you doing?” he asked, his voice trembling and tears burning the backs of his clear blue eyes. “What did I do? Why do you hate me?”  Collin feel to his knew and cradled her body in his arms.
  “No Collin, I could //never// hate you, you’re my brother, but I will not watch” her sentence broke as she coughed up blood and black matter, “ you kill //our// son. Even if it means I have to say goodbye.”She breathed, a tear sliding down her cheek. Lilly’s forever changing eyes had stopped changing and become their original violet, although her eyes were dull and lacked vibrancy as she bled to death on the empty streets of Venice.  Misery,her oldest son, collapsed by her side and wept. “ Love, I want you to tell mommy’s other man that I love him and I want you to listen to you father.” Misery nodded,” Now Go.” She commanded  softly, sighing as the boy ran away.
“ Why don’t you love me the way I love you,Lilly?”
“Because, Collin, you’re my brother and I love Seth, I want to be with my mate Seth...” her voice broke again and she gasped for air. ‘ Seth I love you, I’d never meant to hurt you. Please don’t hate me.’ She whispered in her mates mind, then rested her head on her brothers’ stomach and waited, in pain, for death to claim her...again. Collin lifted her and took her to cliff they played on when they were once children.
“Mommy,” Misery yelled as he ran up to Lilly’s dying body. “I love you please don’t leave.” Collin glared at him.
“I love you, too. I promise, Misery, I’ll come back.” She whispered, her eyes moved to Collins angry face. “Collin, take care of him.”
“Only because I love you.” He said as she slowly, beautifully blew away as ash.
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