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Rated: 18+ · Short Story · Supernatural · #1338089
Car isn't working, phones not working and something's out there!!
It’s Coming
By Morgoth

“Sarah, come on you and I both know that the directions you gave me were wrong.”

“Hey I’ve been driving down this same road for almost an hou...”

“No I didn’t turn down the wrong road!” The man yelled into the phone.

“I’m on! Hill Road!”

“Yes! The sign said Hill Road!”

“Look I know what I saw and…. Hello, Sarah, damn it!”

“I can’t believe this, I’m going to be late for that damn meeting!”

“Ting, ting, ting, ting.” Chimed the car dashboard.

“Wonderful, just wonderful, you just had to start blinking didn’t you? Stupid service engine soon, thing!!”

“Ugh! Out of all the other nights why’d I have to get lost tonight?”

SLAM!!!! Screeeeeeeechrrrrrrrrrr! Boom!!!

Creeeeeaaaak! Slowly the car door opened the man inside the over turned vehicle groaned in pain. A deep cut just over his right eye was gushing blood, the man didn’t notice. Painfully he began crawling out of the front seat, he then staggered to his feet. The cut above his eye spewed out blood, he didn’t notice he was still too dazed to notice. He discovered that some how his car had flown off of the road and into this ditch, what he didn’t know was why. The still dazed man turned back to face his car and gasped.

“What the hell happened to my car? It looks like someone took a can opener to the thing!!” He yelled.

The right side of the car was completely torn to pieces, here and there a jagged piece of metal protruded from the chaos of mangled car parts. Then something in the shrapnel caught his eye, something that was not metal or part of the car. Slowly and quietly he creped towards this thing, it was defiantly not part of the car. It looked as though what ever it was had been embedded in to the metal its-self. Tightly he grasped the foreign object and tugged, surprisingly it came free and the thing that was once embedded in the car, now sat in the palm of his hand. It was unlike any thing he had ever seen before and it appeared to be organic. Well, at least he thought it was, but how could any living creature have claws as big as this?

Suddenly every thing went quiet not even the crickets chirped.

RAAAAAHHHHH!!!

The man spun around, what ever that was it was behind him.

RAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

He spun around it had gotten behind him again and it was closer now.

“Nothing alive can move that fast!!” He thought aloud.

RAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

Now it was to his left and much, much closer. The man started running in the opposite direction along the bottom of the ditch. It was too steep to try and climb now. So he ran as fast as his legs could take him, he hoped it was not too late to escape.

RAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!

It was above him now at the top of the ditch! It was almost on him. He stopped thinking that maybe, just maybe he could fight it off. So he turned ready to face it, ready to fight. Something wet and sticky landed on his cheek then oozed down on to his chin from which it fell to the ground. Slowly he turned around ready to face his hunter.



Four miles away the meeting for paranormal experts, which Mr. Richardson was supposed to attend, had ended. Now every one was leaving the building and getting into their cars.

AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

“What the bloody hell was that?” Roared a doctor.

“What ever it was it sounded far away, so there isn’t any need to worry.” Replied his driver.

“Who ever said any thing about being worried? I just want to get home.”
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