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This a story that my boyfriend wrote. Please tell him it doesnt suck.
CONDEMNED




Where am I? Its so dark. I cant see anything. Whats going on? A musty smell fills the room, almost as if it where the smell of death. I dont know what to do. Should i move? The room is freezing, way below comfort temperature. The taste of the air is as musty and deathly as the smell. The floor felt as if it was concrete, what happened before i woke up in this horrible place. I can remember clearly. I came home late from work. I felt horrible cause its my job to deliver bad news. I am a doctor at the Paisley Hotspital. My name is William, Will for short. I had to tell a father that his daughter was diegnosed with cancer and could die at any moment. I remember going to bed. And I seem to have awakened in this foul place. It was quiet, the only sound i could hearis water droplets, like the oned from a leak in the ceiling during a thunderstorm. The water falling into a pale to keep it from damedgeing the floor. Other than the dripping water and my breathing, was complete silence. I sit here for hours until I lie down and sleep. It was a deep sleep, one like which i was struck into acoma, such a deep sleep, one could confuse it with death. I awaken.....and the lights where on. I struggle to get up. Everything is blury. My eyes have not quite recovered from such a deep sleep. I now can see, I am in a cylinder shaped building. About as big around as your average high school classroom, and approxxamently 10 stories. I look around and its as if im in a jail cell with a couple different passages, some go up some go down some left to right and others go diagnally. There all narrow passageways for me to go. There are so many
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