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by Makiah
Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Death · #1633358
A Test writing to have some of my work published. I am an amiture so dont BE too harsh.
  The pain is getting worse and worse as your murderer stabs you over and over. You cant scream because your mouth is full of blood. As the pain gets worse you become light headed and woozy. You are easily overwelmed and your are fighting just to breath. He stabs you one last time as he finally kills himself in the shame of what he has done.





  Now you can you close your eyes. The pain is finally going away. You no longer feel the need to breath. You see a bright light coming towards you as you see what is after death. You begin to miss your life and everything that you have seen. You are sad for your family because you know the feeling of a family members death. But slowly all worries fade and you do too.
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