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by JDemon
Rated: · Sample · Drama · #1658726
Losing Focus, Eyes Blurring, Hope Fading, Death Looming
Pain jolted through my frail body. My eyes blurred whether with tears or blood or unconciousness I will never know. My chest felt like it was being ripped in half and a warm wet something flowed around my neck and stomach, blood I now realized.I could hear my heart pounding as the wound between my ribs pulsed angrily. I tried despiratly to stop the flow of blood, now dripping onto the white floor. I whimpered a soft low moan that gurgled in my severed chest. The last thought that raced through my tired brain was I love you, and thank you for all you've given me. Everything went black.
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