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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Action/Adventure · #1850914
the book i wrote is really good
The story of how john got lost in the woods.

Hi I’m john smith .i live with my step brother in tensee .so I got up on a sunny Monday and I walked down the stairs and I saw my step brother making breakfast .so I said brother which is Danny Johnson .his job as a medic is to help people .so he said I have to go to work. And I was said wait a minute can I go for walk in the woods /forest .he said sure. so I went for a walk in the forest and I saw this cool path and I said its a good thing I have my hiking boots on incase its muddy. So I went down the path and I put pine cones in the the path so I don’t get lost in the forest .but I started to head back .but it started raining and I couldn’t see anything because was going fast as bullets .


And the pine cone got washed away . so it was raining for three hours and than It stopped .but it was freezing cold and I went to find a tree with shelter and I saw one and so, I went to it.

And went to find some wood to make a fire . it’s a good thing I have a red lighter in my back pack. so I said oh ya wait a minute I do have a lighter . so I went to my bag to get a lighter and some papers . so I could start the fire. I lit it and the fire went 6 feet in the air . ‘’I said wooh ‘’!!. A spark flew and I jumped!.


The next day it wait was a sparky Tuesday morning when I got up I saw a vicious bear tracks .i said its nothing . I looked around the corner and I saw a bear . so I got a piece of wood from the fire good thing it was still burning so I walked very slowly towards the vicious bear . so I pointed the lit up stick at him and made full eye contact with him. And than avengly he took off. I said close one. So I had 2.9 km left hopefully . than the next day a it is working Wednesday . so I went out to look for food I couldn’t find anything to eat. But than I just remember you can eat dandelions’ and that’s very cool and nice and it’s a good thing I have a fire still going from the morning . so I got 10 dandy-lions and I went back to cook and bake them in the fire and they actually tasted spectactacular.and it was time to continue my journey trail in wilderness of the grand Tennessee falls forest.


As I was walking I saw some bear tracks and I said its probilty nothing just some kids than I went to touch tracks and they were real and not just some funny joke than before I kept walking . I saw somebody . so I went and walked over and I ‘’I said hi’’ .and ‘’he said ‘’ hey kid what’s your name . I said john. oh, hi john and he said my name is jony. So , what you made come here . I live here .ooh cool. but I got lost do you know the way out of here . he said I have a map of this place if that helps he said okay. And I said bye.


See you later so I heard it was some guy with sun shades on. But than I heard a dog. And as I was sprinting I saw lassy. I said is that you lassy. And I said yes!!!. Ok lets keep running through these 6 feet tall trees .and I still remember when jony gave the map he said watch out for bob.

So I said okay ? so than I actually saw a deadly sign that said dead end DO NOT CROSS .also than I saw bob. I was like oh crap shit shit crap its bob .come on lets go lassy so we keep running . but up ahead I saw a sign that said 1.0 km .if you want to get out of here. QUICKER!. Take the path to the left and it was getting dark so it was time to call it a day .

so it was time to make a fire . so we went to camp underneath a tree. So I made a fire and layed out some sharped pointy knifes around it. So when a wolf comes around . I will throw a sharped bladed knife at its head . I was like its time to sleep . good night lassy .see you in the morning . so it was a day 4 a thirsty Thursday . I wondered how much longer of this . so as I was walking . i saw bob.i said oh crap so I started to run through the trees .he was like I just I want to talk .i said NO .so he shot 3 bullets out of his gun .but they missed me . so I stopped. And I tried to throw a knife at him. But than a wolf came and attack my foot . so it was 8 pm. Okay? lets camped here . so I made a fire and I got a sharped knife out and put the pointy part in the flaming fire . so I could the wound with care .
when I went to sleep with lassy my dog . so it was 2 pm . when I waked up ok its time to hit the tracks . so as we were walking. We stumble across a fork in the path. So we went the middle of the fork and we went to the right . except were lots of vicious bear tracks .so keep eyes peeled for anything. Especially a CAUTION sign that says dead end.

So it was day 5 a beautiful Friday so I said lassy lets keep sprinting through . so we have 1.9 km left hopefully. So as I was running I saw the guy . so I kept sprinting than I stop I was like is that you Danny yes. There’s a guy named bob with sun shades on. Okay? Just keep running okay? . step-brother .so Danny got his sniper rifle out and aim the gun at him and shot him in the arm . but than he shot my step-brother in the guts. I was like noooooooo!! Step-brother so its up to me now to get out of here . good thing I still have a map so the map says I’m heading north. ok lets keep going .we have 0.9 km left to go until were out of this place. and lets camp here . than before I went to camp I saw a great big enormous sign that says 1.1 km left to go.

Ah yes its magnificent and gorgeous Friday . so me and lassy continue are dusty interesting trail that goes some where .but I just remember my step-brother died so that’s that . but that doesn’t stop us . so we have now 1.1 km left to go hopefully! Because I starting to get dehydration .but we were going to find some where to camp for the night in 3 hours. So as I was walking . I saw a big deer with antlers . so luckily it was close for me to kill it with my bladed knife .so I got my knife out from my pocket and threw it at the deer . so it was 2 hours later and it started to get dark. So we stop and camp at this tree .so, I went to get some wood for the fire because it was -20 bone chilling which felt really like antarica and we went to sleep but I got hungry . so I got up and I said wait a minute we forgot to cook the deer. and it was 5 am in the morning so I cooked it and it actually tasted good and not raw .

So it was a moving Saturday . so we go to have breakfast and now lets continue are journey trail to home . and I saw my real-brother Joe smith. And I started sprinting very fast at him. And I said there Is this guy that keeps following me. He said what’s his name . I said his name is bob. okay? oh by the way my real- brother is a cop. and he was like I supposed to arrest him for murder. So you will helped . he said yes. Okay so my brother shot him and said freeze . And bob said or else what. I will shoot you. and than my brother got his sniper rifle out and shot him in the head and he died . well he wont be bothering anyone else any more . bob is now dead. Joe said its getting late . so we went to camp underneath a tree . bro said where 3 hours away from getting home. so I went to get some wood to make a bomb fire a bomb fire before we have to go sleep. And we had hot dogs .it was a sunshine Sunday .so we started walking fast . just 1 hour from getting home .and seeing are parents Steve and lisa. And than we finally arrived home safety .THE END.

So we all had a nice day. it was nice to see my parents and brother. And it was back to the usual boring school day . and my brother had to go back to his job at t.d that stands for Tennesse police department. And my parents to go to work to make money and that’s my story .



Monday ,January,2011,6.

By the way my step-brother didn’t die .he is now in the hospital for 2 weeks but he got shot in the guts but he manage to survive it.

The nurse said amazingly it didn’t go in any of your step-brothers ribs. So the whole family show to say your going to live and not die .

Everyone live really well.my step-brother was back at ambulance working again.my mom was working at the k-mart.my dad was working at the cia .my brother joe smith was back working at the police tense department of justice. Finally, im back as 16 year old working at walmart. And going back to the James Demetrio high school.





AUTHOR:WILL RAPANOS
ILLUSTRATED:WILL RAPANOS
WRITED BY :WILL RAPNOS






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