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Its about a family lost every thing.
It starts in a beginning that they had a happy life; the mom was killed in a car crash five years ago. The dad, his name was Marcus, He has three boys. Derek is a leader and smart, Chris he’s strong and he is brave, and Jake he is a pain in the butt because he always tries to do everything by his self in his own way.
They went to a vacation for 16 days.
“We should go out of town to a vacation I guess,” suggested Derek.
“O.K let’s go get ready for tomorrow,” Dad replied.
“We’re going to need tickets, and a lot of money from the bank for a loan.” Dad replied.
At the airport, “There were a lot of people” Chris replied,
“Dad we’re going to be late” Derek said. so they ran to the plane the hit everybody just get to the plane then left to Hawaii they saw so many things that they wanted to do. They had a lot of fun they went to see the volcano then they went to go surfing and saw a lot of girls and they played volleyball with them too. They went to a suit motel to sleep, the rooms was so clean that they can sleep on the floor.
They went to the table “We are ready to eat dad, what are we eating tonight” Chris ask.
Dad replied “were going to eat a lot of food that you haven’t tried yet” they ate a lot of food like Pork dishes often feature shredded barbeque pork the hamburger patty, a fried egg, and gravy of a Loco Moco, Japanese style tonkatsu and the traditional lu'au favorite, kalua pig and beef dad said “Was is it good”. “Yes it was good” Chris replied.
When they got back, from Hawaii everything was gone so they lost everything their close, TV there money and they broke everything inside the house.
The dad said, “Who would do this to us” Derek said “Know what we do.” The next day the dad tries to get everything then they lose their house, because the dad was so up sit that they couldn’t pay anything like the bills and taxes.

He went to the bank for another loan and the lady replied “No we can’t give another loan I’m sorry”. There was a guy went up to him and said “I would give you money but you have to pay me back Intel next Friday or there be trouble from me.
Then it was next Friday they boys were at school dad saw the men at the front door you can hear the bell rings, the dad went to the door and he saw the man that he saw last Tuesday. Dad said hello” “ hey do you got my money” he replied dad said “no I don’t have it yet” then the man came in side with a lighter in his hand he burned the house with gasoline and the dad got mad he was fighting him in the fire you can hear the fire, wood falling and the house crumbling. The dad left the house and locks the doors that way they don’t get out of the house. The man tried to get out from the house but he can’t get so he died inside the fire.
The boys comes back from school, Jake said “what happen to the house” the dad to them everything about what happened. Then they staed at a hotel they get have jobs for them all tried to get money to get a new place to live in then they have get money enough to pay, so they get different jobs to get the money to buy a place to live, it took them five weeks just to get everything better and they did. 

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