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Rated: E · Lyrics · Personal · #1970408
I wrote a sing for my boyfriend and i would love some feedback on improvements.
I know

verse 1:
At first we started out cool,
And, well, it seemed to get better,
And we ended up, soon,
Getting closer in the change of weather,
But now as I look back,
I see how amazing it would be,
If only for a minute,
We could look back and see,
chorus:
The people that we should hold close,
Are the ones without without measure,
And now as I am composing this song,
I see that you're my treasure.
Verse 2:
So trust me when you feel bad,
I know how it feels,
To be treated so badly
That it's hard to even deal,
The pressure is so heavy,
It's hard to even show,
How much you love me baby,
Trust me because I know!
(chorus)
bridge:
the reason I love you the most,
Is because you give me the same love back,
And darling, I'll be your host
If only you can promise to keep us on track.
(chorus)

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