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Rated: E · Novel · Action/Adventure · #2105831
Just a quick thing.I remade the first chapter and prologue since the spelling mistakes.

Galaxia wars-Verundor

Prologue
In a land where mythical beasts come to life and weapons turn into ships,there was a certain type of people you can become.......AUTOMATRIONS.They set out planet to planet with one goal in mind...to find a special treasure in the middle of the universe called the....SMEIRO.Of course everyone wanting the treasure made sure almost every where was a war driven place.But there was one place 6 light years away from this treasure and this place was called.....Soario.In this special place there was a kid called Jack who had the dream to become and Automatrion but one day his parents mysteriously disappeared,so with the help of an alien girl called Sabrina and Jack's friend John they'll cross the whole universe to find Jack's parents and maybe even the perplexing treasure known as the Smeiro.

Chapter one-tale of the autobuster
Weeks before the enigmatic disappearance of jack's parents,Jack was a cheerful boy who always knew right from wrong.He would go and help people around the realm,help his parents and never lied.Although this was the case he would sometimes do stuff he wouldn't normally do causing.....let's just say the evacuation of a whole town.He could do that because of the powers inherited from his dad and mum.
Josh glanced over at Jack"Are you ready for the automatrion test tomorrow?"inquired
With glee,Jack stated"You sure I am!"
Looking doubtful,he asked "Have you studied?"
With a shrug.his friend whispered"Nope...."
Jack and his friend Josh went to the a school called automatrion academy,where you could train to becomean automatrion.Jack want's to be automatrion so badly so that he can venture to defeat who knows what in the galaxy.But the thing is he always procrastinates meaning he waits till the last moment to do anything.But because of this he'll never know that this will be the problem of why his parents disappeaed.

Chapter two-The final justice
As Jack and Josh entered the test centre they were surprised to see how amazing the test centre looked.There was many options for the test including:Autobuster,Autobooster,Automage and many others.Jack chose the Autobuster since his bloodline(family) was filled with Autobusters including his dad and grandfather.
Wondering about what his friend will say,Jack says"So Josh,what'll you be choosing?"
Awnsering his friend's question,Josh awnsers"Well since my bro became one I will to!"
As he said this the most extraordinary thing happened.....a plethora of the best team of Automtrions were walking in and they were called.......FINAL JUSTICE.Their team was filled with the universe's most treacherous bounty hunters who came to the academy to show off some of the options you an choose to become.Anyway back to Jack and Josh.They started the test as soon as the teacher shouted"START!"Jack started normal and actually went on really well.
Boastfully,Jack whispers"Hey dude,look how well im doing i'm probably going to be the best!"
Sounding preoccupied,Josh whispers back"what?"
Raising his voice,Jack exclaims"I said look......"
Interrupting him,the teacher says"Do you want to share that with the class Jack?"
The whole class then whispered and sniggered.Of course being Jack who doesn't like getting in trouble he stormed out of the room,not knowing what was goingto happen the week after




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