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Rated: GC · Short Story · Death · #2141263
the final minutes of Mr. Sloin
As he was screaming in agony he heard a door open, then out walked a man wearing all black. (shoes,pants,shirt,vest,tie,jacket and long brim hat) he walked with a slow and patient paste then stopped, when he did,,,Sloin was begging "Please,(crying) I'm just a English teacher, I am no one,,,Please, LET ME GO!" he was crying and drooling snot and blood. Then the man turned around and walked quickly towards a gear wheel that had a thick rope wrapped around it, it wasn't long toll Sloin realized it was connected to his hands and feet.

the man took off his hat and put his hand on the wheel, that's when Sloin couldn't stop crying. The man started turning the wheel slowly, pulling Sloin down as his back was ripping with puss and blood pouring down. Sloin was vomiting out blood and stomach waste as the hooks where ripping his flesh slowly off, exposing his muscles and veins and spinal cord,non the less blood and gore.

After 15 turns, the only thing that was keeping him and his back connected was 3 strands of thick nerves. as the blood/puss and vomit was dripping out of his nose, he simply asked "why are y-you doing this to m-me" he couldn't really talk loud because of the petrifying pain. the man heard him and stopped then turned around revealing his face. it was a skull with a flesh skin latex tight mask, the man had no eyes yet was looking directly at his and replied with a calm deep voice "because you've sinned in a unforgivable manor, therefor it is your time to die,and I am your humble Death" he made one last big turn then...RIP... Sloin fell 15 stories down head first and splattered. when the cops found him,,,there was no trace of anyone there, the case was closed as a suicide.


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