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Rated: E · Poetry · Writing · #842463
A Double Cinquam 4-8-12-16-4 syllable count
My entry:
Imagine Dying At Sea


Raging rough seas
Spill over and drag me under
Salty waters burn sun-dried split lips and cracked skin
Bobbing like a water-logged cork; blinded by a hot raging sun
Death's angel comes




Oh, yea, I almost did it again...this is what I wrote before I reread the instructions. Just thought ya'll would get a chuckle. I hate deleting anything that I have to count so carefully to write. *Bigsmile*

Click Clack Click Clack
Fingers race to keep up the pace
By the computer screen's glare my mind fades to black
Dreams of third printings of books I have yet written come to life there
Dreams do come true?
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