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Rated: 18+ · Novella · Romance/Love · #977115
a romance story i'm writing.I'm hoping to get feedback to help me R+R Please.
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Chapter 2
¿!El cielo está faltando un ángel?!'
'Is heaven missing an angel? What are you talking about Adrian? Oh, let me guess, you've seen a girl? Gregorio knew that look on his friend's face and it usually meant trouble, especially when he spoke in Spanish- 'the language of love' he called it!


Adriano Garcia- rich, handsome and smart. Unfortunately he was also the ‘love ‘em and leave ‘em type! How he managed to get women to fall at his feet Gregorio would never know. Then again it wasn’t as if he had to try.

Meanwhile across the room, Rochelle Nox was talking animatedly with her penpal- soon to become 'dorm buddy'.
"So" Asked Lily, "Got your eye on any hotties yet? Any bloke caught your eye?"
"No, I think I might lay low for a while, my last 'escapade' was enough- but it taught me two things; how to spot a fake and how to play dirty. I couldn't though, I'm far too nice" replied Rochelle, thinking painfully about her last encounter with a man who 'caught her eye'.


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