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74 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I don't have a predefined template. I might make one up on spot or not use one at all. I am very honest but my ratings are rarely bad, I rarely dislike items. I try to give helpful reviews, but try not to be too harsh.
I'm good at...
being honest. I won't sugar quote things, but won't be too harsh either. I will make sure that my rating matches my review.
Favorite Item Types
Any style of poetry, particularly short and free verse.
Least Favorite Item Types
Novels or long stories.
I will not review...
novels or long stories.
Public Reviews
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Review of Messed up.  
Review by Red
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really liked it! If this is your first poem ever, then I must say you have some really good writing skills. The only improvement I could think off -
'to which the answer is stuck in my throat.'

I think it should just be 'the answer is stuck in my throat'. The first two words make the sentence sound rather weird.

A wonderful poem, you must continue writing!

A review of my poem Red will be much appreciated. Do have a lokk if you have the time.

Keep reading and writing,
~Red
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Review of Break Free  
Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can relate to this one alot, as I am sure many people can, especially teenagers. Many of your poems seem to have the same underlying theme, you might have written them all at the same time, or perhaps you are going through a phase that makes you feel this way.
Regardless, they are all wonderful, this one included. I love the comparison of a dull, spark-less life to that of a concert with no mike. It is wonderful how you put a smile on the reader's face by using a similie like that, even though it is a serious poem.

Just one error, the 'i' in the first line should be in uppercase.

Keep reading and writing,
~Red.
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Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your writing style is so simple, and yet you get your message across in a powerful way. Like all the other poems in your portfolio, this one also has a very good rythm. The words just roll of my tongue. It is so much fun reading your poems!
Keep reading and writing,
~Red
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Review of Battle Of Souls  
Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is short and simple, and that is what I like the most about it. I love how it flows so well, the rhyming doesn't seem forced.
I also love the theme - Battle of Souls.
My favorite lines -
'Sweaty palms,
Bitten nails,
Ringing alarms'

A real good job!

Keep readin and writing,
~Red
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Review of Little Questions  
Review by Red
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Short and amazing.The questions that have been raised here really get you thinking about the world and the way in which it works.I simply loved the beginning.This piece shows how amazingly creative and talented you are.You have left a deep impression with only a few words.Great job, thank you for sharing this.
Keep writing
~Red
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Review of Sinking Ship  
Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hahaha, loved it!
"Women and children first," Captian Michael Jackson roared as he ran to the lifeboats. "Save the pearls from the cockroaches!"
~Red
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked it. Its sad, but that doesn't make it any less beautiful. I really like the concept of the three different dreams, yet every time you wake up to the same scenario - she isn't there.Its full of emotions.Nicely written.
Keep writing
~Red
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Review by Red
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked it.Your emotions come across very strongly.It has a really wonderful flow.I also love the imagery, I could almost see and hear all of the thunder and moans, it felt like I was there watching the whole thing.I think, if you had some anger in you when you wrote this, writing this must have cooled you down a lot.Good job.
Keep writing
~Red
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Review of A Dream  
Review by Red
Rated: E | (3.5)
I can totally relate, as I am sure many others can.We all dream about growing up,having the perfect life,freedom,love,everything.But it doesn't always turn out that way does it? We all realize that life isn't a fairy tale, but that doesn't stop us from dreaming. I like the theme of this poem. Nicely expressed.
Keep writing
~Red
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Review by Red
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It has a wonderful flow to it. I especially love the last few line 'For those of you that read this...'.I also love how you have referred to the source of the footsteps as 'it' in 'It knows that I fear it', it somehow makes the poem even more spookier.
Keep writing
~Red
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