A really fierce poetry. The heart is a mortar and a shell simultaneously. The former, I guess, is preferable. “The beautiful death” is of course beautiful from the mortar’s point of view. “Raining” is gorgeous, but needs clarification: do not mortar shells explode on impact?
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