Wow! Eloquent and stirring. I lost my career that day along with associates and it was one of the few times that I chose not to address it either in song or poetry. I chose to do just as the author did, remain my cheerful little self and go on my merry way, which included focusing on graduating from flight attendant school which was scheduled the following day, but was delayed until the 13th. This was brilliant. I don’t feel so alone or bad in how I chose to react and deal with it.
I found this rather interesting. Even thought the title should have set-up the preface, half-way through I found myself wondering if this was about a hobo or some poor homeless soul sleeping under litterl to keep warm. It wasn't until I read the disclaimer at the bottom that it fell into place instantly. It was non-decriptive while it was describing, rather precisely I might add, the main character's thoughts and feelings. Good work.
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