It is a great thing that you trying to get the ball rolling. I certainly have done my share of reviews, but I don't get nearly the amount back. I am wondering if it is because much of my material is to dark? Anyway glad you are here!
I liked it of course,partly because the subject intrest me so much. I am striken with this stupid Aids. However I am lucky enough to have drugs that seem to be extending my life. The poor people in Africa not so much as a parent to help them through because Aids has taken them all. I feel for them and for every person who suffers in this world.
So far so good, you are definitly doing a great job explaining, something that is so vast. How would one describe the ocean in a small amount of words? It simply can't be done. So If I was wearing a hat it would be off to you right now; so instead I will remove my hairpiece for a moment.
Another fine piece you have wrote, I find myself a little funny to think I could review a piece of yours and give you any real good advice, well I can say this, I enjoyed it is worth every stroke of your keys and once again holds my interest with an admiration and sheer jeaolousy of your talent. My only criticism is that I could really give you is that, I should have wrote it first!
That is absolutly great you have a talent, that no one can teach you. It is something you just have. After reading your bio and realizing how young you were, also makes me think you are special and wise beyond your years. However just enjoy your young years as you have them because they go by so fast! Anyway about this particular piece it shows a person in torment but with a true understanding of ones self. There is not much else you could do to this piece to make it much better nice job!
It's an awful lot of information for a Newbee like me to take in, but it's great because I know it's there for me when I need it. It is mostly to in depth for my ability as awriter to anaylize to much. But I do enjoy reading and learning everything that I can, so in that respect I am glad this information is here for me. It is going to be a stuggle for me to become the writer that I wish but I am sure if I really want it I will. Thank you
No I don't think it ends to soon, your point is clear and well taken. That is why I rated it high because your words became thoughts that went into mine. You smart and on the right track
My parents have a bird, just a little budgie, but a budgie that they love and that loves them, he sings and dances to. He dances to a song from "The Lion KIng" my parents dance too. They are in there 60's they need this bird this bird called BabyBlue. He speaks many many words and sentances too. He is tuely part of our flock. There is no end to this birds talent. Thanks for the story about yours, I am glad we are all enjoying life and have fun you, me, my parents,and our sweet birds.
Your poem was nothing less then perfect, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise. A poem is about words from the heart; your heart and your heart alone. No one can tell you when and where to ryhme no aa bb ababb or what ever they seem to see. Because yours are your words with meaning to you and to your son whether he realizes it or not, someday he will. Take comfort in this; your poem was heard was heard by me, a son, a son who is now facing death and trying to comfort his mother. I just started writing poetry myself. What I have learned is there are rules but the only rules that matter are your rules because your rules have touched me...Andrew for evermore and for ever to be, your mother hood was not wasted on me. Now smile while you can because life is full of learning and it is never to late or to hopeless carry on....
I can say I loved it, but that would be to easy intresting piece, your words are chosen with care or at least it appears that way. Not many things take me by suprise, but I liked it, I saw it through the fire ant's eyes. It is true they battle taht way just as an underdog who believes in his pliet might. NIce work I really enjoyed it!
Anytime, anyone puts a lot ot thought into anything a 5.0 rating is really the only option. Unless it really stinks; but of course this doesn't WOW!!!!
Talent, Talent, Talent
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