I am not sure of the purpose of this writing. It seems more like a letter you would write to a friend. It is well written. I saw no spelling errors. The grammar is first rate. The letter has a nice flow to it and I can picture the personality of the writer.
A very good beginning to a story. Makes me want to read more. To bad it's only based on a true crime and not about a crime in real life. The story is great but there are some typos that need fixed. Other than the typos it is a real keeper. Character development is perfect.
Well written. It grabs the readers attention. It tells that the author is not just passionate about the subject but was part of it. I saw no spelling errors. Grammar was good. Great call to action.
This story is well written. I found no spelling errors. The descriptions were very clear. I felt like I was in the story. The author is good at painting a visual picture with words. The grammar is top notch. He should put all this talent into another story. If the police actually investigate criminal activity like is depicted in the story there would be a cry from the public. Great writing but the storyline is not consistent with modern procedures or police practices.
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