Well done. The gloves work as a hook, holding the reader's interest. The weaving of past details works well too. We get the build-up of the destruction of the "perfect marriage" ideal with just enough information provided. It drips with a bit of sarcasm too, which I like. She understands that her husband is a control freak, recognizes the pitfalls many women in abusive relationships fall into and that her's is complicated with two young children, but also that it is not healthy for herself or the children. Using the perfectly manicured nails to leave lasting scars on the face of her husband was a nice touch. All the pieces fit together nicely. Well done.
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