This was fun. Not too serious but it gets the point across. I emailed the creator of Exercise Your Writing because I wanted to join. I can't wait til she replies. Do you like the group? I enjoyed reading this.
I liked the plot. The idea of what really goes on in an advertising company is a good one. However, the dialogue was lacking a certain degree of reality. You've got to think about what people really say and how they really talk. I think you definitely have something here, though. Work on the realism and the interaction between the characters and you've got a really good story.
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