Hi! I just reviewed this item. Explanations of my rating criteria are at the end.
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Presentation:
This looks good, other than at the end where you did not capitalize "I" - a pet peeve of mine, I guess you could say.
The Writing:
This is well written with a lot of heart and hope. It also has an ending that concludes it well...it lets me know that this isn't some celebrity or someone you hardly know....it's a friend that you have feelings for.
Overall Enjoyment:
This hit a personal note. About two years ago, I started falling head over heels in love with someone. But it was one of those things that could never be. For one, I doubted he felt that way for me. And he was seven years older than me and I knew his parents (who thought of me as a daughter practically) would totally freak out about it because of our age difference.
Well, we became friends. And to make a very long, complicated story short, I have been seriously seeing each other since October. And every day, I just can't believe that we're together now!
Although I don't know the case with your friend here...you never know what will happen!
Thanks for sharing,
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Hi! I just reviewed this item. Explanations of my rating criteria are at the end.
Maxiumium Stars:
For Presentation:
For Writing:
For Overall Enjoyment:
Presentation:
Very, very well presented. Easy to read, good punctuation, and I don't see any errors.
The Writing:
This is so sweet. A loving friendship is not as common as one may think. I've had many friends that were not friends after all. It very well written and I liked it very much. Good flow.
Overall Enjoyment:
It reminded me of this quote:
“True friends are like diamonds, precious and rare. False friends are like leaves, found everywhere.”
Thanks for sharing,
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The Writing
- Plot
- Characters
- Originality
- Descriptions
- Flow
- Development
- Dialogue
- Consistency
- Style
- Well thought out
- Ability to evoke emotion
Overall Enjoyment
- If I enjoyed the item greatly
- If I feel the writer did a really great job
I try to give detailed reviews that are practical, helpful, and unbiased. I try to point out the good with the bad.
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Hi! I just reviewed this item. Explanations of my rating criteria are at the end.
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For Presentation:
For Writing:
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Presentation:
I think this poem would be better presented if you put a little bit of punctuation in. For your decription, write something about this poem...it will spark more interest for readers and you will be more likely to get reviews.
The Writing:
Although short, you get your purpose across well. It is written very nicely. At points it seems slightly repetitive though. "To be" and "like you" is repeated so many times.
Overall Enjoyment:
This piece did evoke some emotion. I can remember sometimes I would just say, "Lord, help me! I'm going crazy and I don't know why I do what I do." One of those been there type of things once I read it.
Thanks for sharing!
Please note that if you have made changes and would like to have me re-review or just have questions, just email me!
The Writing
- Plot
- Characters
- Originality
- Descriptions
- Flow
- Development
- Dialogue
- Consistency
- Style
- Well thought out
- Ability to evoke emotion
Overall Enjoyment
- If I enjoyed the item greatly
- If I feel the writer did a really great job
I try to give detailed reviews that are practical, helpful, and unbiased. I try to point out the good with the bad.
Feel free to use this criteria. Please link back to me if you do, if you would...I love having new visitors!
Hi! I just reviewed this item. Explanations of my rating criteria are at the end.
Maxiumium Stars:
For Presentation:
For Writing:
For Overall Enjoyment:
Presentation:
Well presented. No errors that I saw. I also think you have a good decription but I don't think the title really does justice to the poem. I mean, it is such a great poem, I think it needs a fantastic title too.
The Writing:
At the very end, I was just like "Wow". I really like how you wrote this. It is great! I like how it ends with how even your song is gone. It is like the spirit was broken. Once a bird, society clips our wings and we're stuck on the ground with the rest of the 'mature' ones.
This has originality and style. It also has a nice flow to it...I really didn't see any rough spots.
Overall Enjoyment:
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Instead of keeping a regular blog, I keep a 'Suggested Reading Blog.' I am going to put a link to this poem in there because I just love this poem!
My Overall Impression:
Suggestions/Errors:
Please note that if you have made changes and would like to have me re-review or just have questions, just email me!
The Writing
- Plot
- Characters
- Originality
- Descriptions
- Flow
- Development
- Dialogue
- Consistency
- Style
- Well thought out
- Ability to evoke emotion
Overall Enjoyment
- If I enjoyed the item greatly
- If I feel the writer did a really great job
I try to give detailed reviews that are practical, helpful, and unbiased. I try to point out the good with the bad.
Feel free to use this criteria. Please link back to me if you do, if you would...I love having new visitors!
This is nicely written and without spelling and/or grammatical errors. I think the lack of punctuation makes it stronger...better. That's about all I can say!
This story is great! It is a good length...not too long, not too short. It is cery cute also. I like the characters and how they are given a personality. I liked the confrontation between Jennifer and Kelly. It wasn't fake and forced like some stories seem to be. Also, the damsels in distress part was cute and it took me a second to get it...it kept me thinking.
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