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150 Public Reviews Given
167 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I try to be as nice as I can and give you what I think the view of a reader would be along with helping you to fix your mistakes, But I'm not good what it comes to a lot of them.
I'm good at...
helping to fix the little mistakes and with poems, and giving a readers point of view. also at understanding meaning and I am good at plot lines.
Favorite Genres
fantasy mostly, but I will read almost anything.
Least Favorite Genres
erotica
Favorite Item Types
poems
Least Favorite Item Types
camp fires
I will not review...
camp fires, erotica, short stories over 2k words, I will review novels but it will take me a long time to get though it all so you may not what to ask me.
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Review by Song Bird
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1*I really like the message behind this poem. it could use some work on the flow. but only a little bit. and some one else could think that i'm worng about that. so ya lol. it's still a wounderful poem. my favorite part is Life is short. so you've got to live and love,and never forget, all the struggles, and most importantly you've got to learn from them.

Song Bird,*Vine2*
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Review of To love someone  
Review by Song Bird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1* Wow, this is a woundrful poem, I really like the message behind it and the way it flows. my favorite part would have to be,

Till the fear is extinguish
Till you walk in hope,

this poem really shows alot about true love. true love is hard but it's worth it.

Song Bird,*Vine2*
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Review by Song Bird
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
i can't understand both sides of hunting why not to and why to. as long it's not just for sport i can undersatnd it if some one is going to use all if the Animal then there is a reson to hunt it. if some one is just going after it's head as a pize then i do not understand. but all in all it's to keep there form being so miny of them that there's isn't enfo food to sastan them. i can understand why not to kill them because i myself could never be able to hurt another liveing thing. but i do undersatnd the need for hunters and not just the humen onces. but besides all that i really do like this poem.

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Review of I'm a Mother  
Review by Song Bird
Rated: E | (5.0)
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ok first sorry i forgot to chage the one to a two on the last one. i think this is a wounderfull poem. and i think my mom would agree what that lol she dosen't do that much anymore but she has six kids and her oldessn't wouldn't let her lol but my older sister is now liveing with are nana so i'm the oldessn't kid in the house know so i can understand all of that seeing as i do alot around the house lol this is a wounderfull poem.

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Review by Song Bird
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's a Just Because Party from The Elven Tea Garden! *BalloonO*
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Review One of Three


i think this was a wounderful poem it kid of remineds me of my grandma Geneva. my favorite thing i reminber about her is that she loved to cook i get my lok of cooking form her and my looks to. i once saw a picther of her when she was 15 and i was 15 when i saw it olny that was defrent what the her hair was short and her outfit. i was even named after her. thank you and your firend was right puting the back story to the poem made it easyer to understend. this is awounderfull poem thank you for sharing it. and sorry if i missspelled something i'm Dyslexic and cring a little bit. my Granma Geneva died about two years ago not long after a lost my papa. again i think you sure sharing this poem.


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Review of Little Bird  
Review by Song Bird
Rated: E | (5.0)
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ok this was is ok it took me abit to understd what a Haiku is seeing how it turned out to be more then i thought it was lol i still don't fully understand what it is i think so i'm only going to reviews this Haiku lol i really like this poem a lot but i'm going to just review one of you other kind of porms till i can fully understand Haikus

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Review of Strawberry  
Review by Song Bird
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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ok it was a really net poem it fell a liitle short for me i was thinking that their would be more about starwbarries. but i think thats mosty did because strawbarrries are my favorite barries. i really do like it. it is a wounderfull poem. i just think it was lacking a bit.

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