What a great way to look at something you're considering.
I think this is great! I also think you should keep writing, whatever it may be.
Whether it's poetry or short story or just your thoughts in words. Write on!!
The world only has room for one Shakespeare, just as it only has room for one tonibarri.
Show the world who you are inside, share with us your thoughts. I am already intrigued.
Can't wait to read more from you.
I just wanted to say that this is an amazing piece of writing. I can visualize in my mind what your words are saying. Great work. I love how you describe her every feature with worldly things. It's just wonderful. It caught my attention and kept it. Great flow too. Keep expressing yourself so vividly, it's awesome. Write on!!
I really enjoyed reading this. I think actions speak volumes more then words ever could. I think you hit right on with the differences between saying and showing someone how you feel. This part, "Lies fall from people's lips like flakes of winter's snow", wonderful descriptive writing. You have great flow here too. I'm glad I came across your writing, poet. Write on!!
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